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I just want to get away. Away from the noise of this house. It's winter so outside isn't an option so I'll have to settle for the garage. It's not as frigid in there but it's still chilling so I bring a small space heater.

I find an old lawn chair and set it up next to the only plug I can find. As the ancient off white heater warms up I look around. This place is so dirty. The concrete floor needs sweeping and the corners have bad at least twenty past hosts. I guess it's okay because no one ever comes out here this time of year.

Finally the heater is warmed up. So much that my shins are almost burning. I move them aside so that the rest of my body can feel the tiny sun. After I move my foot I see a quarter sized beetle. It's exoskeleton is dark but where the light hits it the blue and purple metallic undertones are revealed. I've never seen this kind of insect in person before but I know it's not native to this area. It must have been searching for an escape from the winter and found its way in my garage and I have real heat so it came close.
Out of the corner of my eye I catch something bright red dart across the dusty floor. Before I can distinguish what it was another beetle inches closer to the heat.

The dark one by my foot somehow climbed up onto my shoe, almost to my ankle. As soon as I reach down to brush it off I feel it's thin legs on the skin of my lower shin. Sharp stinging pain runs up my leg and throughout my whole body. After it subsides I'm left paralyzed.

I slump out of my chair and land on the ice cold concrete floor. I try without prevail to pick my limb body off the ground. More and more beetles scurry around my limited realm of vision but none of the touch me. They are all like the first, dark with a bit of color.
The sedative is starting to calm my mind. I know this poison will kill me but it also makes me feel at peace.

The bright red one steps in front of my eyes, as if it knows I can see it. It acts, in a miniature way, like it is the leader of the cloud of insects surrounding me. It crawls closer to my open mouth and I fear the worst. I feel it's minute foot touches my lip and all hell breaks loose.

All at once they swarm over my body. By now I feel completely calm but normally I would be gagging and flailing to high heavens. The tingling of all of them in my clothing and on my skin soothes my thoughts into nothing and I just listen to the tiny clicks of their scrambling legs hitting one another.

The flow into my throat chokes me but I can't do anything about it. They all want to be inside me and they got their wish.

I'm outside of my body. They killed me for my body. I can feel myself fading out of this world. The last thing I see is my body get up and walk inside my house without me.
I'm really creeped out by bugs especially when there is a lot of them. As you can tell, I write about my greatest fears.

Please don't plagiarize in any way. Its illegal and rude.


EDIT:
Apparently someone made a narration of this without my permittion. I'm okay with it this time but if anyone else does it I'm reporting them.
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Istenox Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it! You describe the beetles so well I can almost feel them crawling up my leg! You should write more stories like this!!
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Vortan-Freegaunt Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:mrcreepypastaplz:
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XxthegothchickxX Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh my god. This is AWESOME XD!!!!
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BlueyedRED Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks! Did you read it or listen to the narration? CreepyPasta did a narration of it on youtube.
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XxthegothchickxX Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Both. I liked both of them a lot.
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BlueyedRED Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks for reading it!! It really means a lot to me!!!
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XxthegothchickxX Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
No problem dude
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XUltraViolettX Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
BUG-RAPE. O_O
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BlueyedRED Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Student Writer
Lol!
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XUltraViolettX Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Also I like your ending alot more then Creepypasta's. D;

creepy smiling is over-used and boring.
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BlueyedRED Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks! He changed a lot of thing but I'm still honored that he narrated it!!! I'm glad you like my ending
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TheSkittles22 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Mr Creepypasta narrated this. Check it out! [link]
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ICANHAZCOMICBOOK Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013
it looks like those Beetles had their way with you
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BlueyedRED Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Student Writer
Lol thanks for taking the time to read it!!
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ICANHAZCOMICBOOK Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
lol NP it's a nice story. MrCreepyPasta even did a narration of it.
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BlueyedRED Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Student Writer
I now he did and that was totally with out my permittion!!!!
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CrimsonMatt52 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Is that really something to be upset about? He just read your story. Do I need permission to read this story to my friends? No. Why would it be different for youtube? Unless he made money. That would be bad. Plus the amount of people he read it to is probably a big chunk of this pages views,
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BlueyedRED Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Student Writer
I wouldn't have been mad if they didn't change it. They completely changed the end and that's what makes me mad. At least they gave credit.
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CrimsonMatt52 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like both endings. He just added a little more.
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campfirefire Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
Wow. Wow. That last image, of the body essentially possessed by insects and walking, like some sort of bug-stuffed scarecrow, into the house, is just pure nightmare fuel. Great job! No sleep for me tonight!
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BlueyedRED Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Writer
I'm glad you... liked it! Idk how I think of these things. I write about my greatest fears.
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KittyPwa Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
charming...
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BlueyedRED Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student Writer
How so?
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KittyPwa Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ironicly XD
Insect control is actualy quite popular, but not in the same way you depicted it. In the "Metamorphose"from Kafka, the narrator turns into a giant beetle... Nonetheless, the idea always has its little ring of freaksih in it.
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BlueyedRED Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student Writer
I haven't really heard of it but I was always appalled by the thought of bugs getting inside of me.
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AnimeFreakMan Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Yikes. Yeah, I used to have nightmares about that as a kid. There were these little bugs and they would burrow through your skin, slowly getting deeper and deeper until... Well that's just about when I would wake up, but still. This story kind of reminded me of that. Also, I love your pic. Midna FTW!
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BlueyedRED Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks!! I love Midna!!! Bugs always creeped me out. Thank you for the nice comment!!!
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